All Comments on 'Cool Down My Heat'

I detected a few misused words but I take it English is your second language. My suggestion is to slow it down a little and add more to your stories.You have the gist of it, don't be afraid to elaborate. Was this your first story ?

Hi,

Nice short little story, needed better editing to help with the flow. Looking forward to reading more of your work

Stacey

Now, this sory and the ones to follow are inspired from my personal experiences. Some are closer to the truth, some are mostly fiction. But this one was as real as it could get except the names and places listed in there. And yes, English is not my first language 😉

Super hot don't care about the language, one of the best on here.

I could feel your amazing chemistry.