All Comments on 'Cornflower Blue Ch. 01'

Once again you have written a heart warming romance that goes right to your reader's emotions. Bravo.

Great beginning!

5

You are a great story teller. Thank you for sharing your fantasy and writing talent. Looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for introducing me to this loving couple.

Cheers

SAGE

An excellent beginning, leaving me feel good about all the characters and hoping for more.

THANKS

You have the ability to tell and wonderful story that draws the reader into it. Then you raise it to the next level by adding loving sex that makes you feel as if you are a part of it.

I will be watching for the next instalment.

Cheers, Andy

Well-written, good plot, good characters, well defined, good dialogue, interesting love story. There were little notions of feelings until Adam went to New York. Did I say this was a good story? Looking toward to chapter two.

*****Very entertaining read good storytelling. Looking forward to future chapters. Thanks for sharing.

Good story. Starts out slowly, then picks up speed. Glad nothing too bad happened in Chapter One

Really good start. Like the slow buildup to them finally getting it on. PS: I love that side of Florida, Johns Pass, Medira Beach. It's a shame many of the old places are being replaced by high rise condos. Progress sucks.

Fantastic keep writing.

Wonderful love story!

I enjoy your style. This is really well written. I look forward to Act 2.

Ah, sequel?

Excellent...can't wait for more...!!!

Please continue!!!!

A truly great story, I would put money on it that it is a TRUE story. Anxious for more......

Wonderful story, 10 stars! Please continue, he may pee in her and put a bun, or two, in her oven!! She won't be sorry,when her name is MOMMY!!

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

very good story, can not understand criticism hidind behind anonymous

Thank You, loved it.

Love finds a way, sometimes..

Often wondered about that, what if your destined One lives in the far east, and You physically on the opposite side of the globe? Damn, maybe miracles occur sometimes?

Anonymous. That's a great story right there! You need to write that one!!..........

"Thank You, loved it.

Love finds a way, sometimes..

Often wondered about that, what if your destined One lives in the far east, and You physically on the opposite side of the globe? Damn, maybe miracles occur sometimes?"