All Comments on 'Corrupted Desire Ch. 01'

This was hot . I cant wait to read part 2.

Toy

Though I do not remember college stidents acting like way as Alex had to nav8gate. This is more like middle schoolers. Looking forward to next installments of Qlex, Daisy and Jaismine.

Well written, love the jasmine character, can't wait for a part 2

Lore question:

If demons exist, does this mean God and angels exist too?

If so, where on Earth is Heaven while a demon is freely roaming the Earth?

I did acknowledge that holy weapons can kill a demon, so yeah, God and angels do exist in this world.

As for where they are...? I'll get to that later...somewhat... It'll be more how Alex is able to stay under the radar than about what he actually has to fear if he's found out. This story will probably only be going on for another two or three chapters but if I end up doing a spinoff or something set in this world then I might get more into the holy side of things.

(Sorry for my spelling, english is not my first language)

I usually don't comment but here I had to. I really loved my reading, you're a very good writer. I mean, most of the time I just come here to read sth to arouse me when i'm horny, but i juste read without even fapping (I mean it in a good way). I just loved the story and the characters. I like Daisy, she's a spoiled brat but not a bad person, I love her relationship with Jasmine. And most of all I love what you did with Alex, he's exactly how I picture a demon. He's evil but funny in some way. Usually I'm reluctant to read noncon story but here it just make me laugh. Well, good job and I'm going to keep reading your stories even if non-human stories aren't my thing in an erotic way (which is strange because I'm a huge fantasy reader haha).

Sorry again for my spelling and thank you for this story. :)

I finished and I'd have to say this is my favorite story on here