by marx810
This was one of the best stories I have read on this site. I would love to see how this story continuous with Jasmines tale.
Great story. I was surprised at the time jumps in this part, but your afterward cleared up the reasoning for it, at least. Yeah, bring on the feedings! The best part of corruption stories is when the reader gets to experience the slow loss of the character's "goodness/soul/morality". Look forward to reading more stories from you set in this universe.
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I wouldn't mind hearing the details of Daisy feeding on her mother. All we know is that she was abusive, but not how. I'd like to know how. And I get a pretty good justice boner when a kid takes revenge on a parent.
If you ever feel like revisiting Jasmine, I'd love to know how she accepts or fights the whole thrall process. I love how absolutely stupid she was for thinking any deal with a demon would end in her favor. Fucking bravo on this whole series.
I'd absolutely love to read about the feedings. Honestly, I enjoyed this series so much. I never usually read stories in the Non-Human category but I'm glad I stumbled on this one.
Ok so I never leave comments because I usually just come and go on this site, but holy shit. I've been looking for a good incubus story for a while and it's either too vanilla or the incubus has a boyfriend vibe, but this...this is what I expected from an incubus.
I wasn't sure if I'm here for the plot or for how horny it got me, honestly half the time I felt like Jasmine half like Daisy.
I'd absolutely want to read more from both this universe and Daisy's feeding, even if it is fucked up it serves the story well. I'm glad you kept it morally messy like this, it really makes it stand out.
You have my bow, sir.
This is one of best smut stories I’ve read that also fucking NAILS a storyline. You did a great job and I hope you continue writing
Sick fuck here, definitely interested in reading about Daisy's horror.
This is really a great work. I expected it just to be typical smut, but you wrote an actually impactful story. Jasmine's ending is just perfect. Well-done.
Definitely didn’t reread it all again nope not me that being said I really don’t know which group I like more Alex’s or Matt’s so it’s gonna be interesting where the stories combine
I didn’t vote because the vast majority of the story was not my thing. Waaaaay too harsh for me. This waa actually the 2nd time I tried to read it. I like humiliation but I like it when the girl gets off on it - in other words, she sets the limits with her arousal. This was just too cruel. I’m glad I stuck it out now and I liked the ending - even though I hated the part before the denouement (I hesitate to call it the climax because it’s the obvious pun based on the death of 10k humans). So I can’t rank it because I hated the various acts although I’m sure that others enjoyed the very painful damage to the girls soul. At least she was well rewarded (and thank you for that - you even made Jazz’ ending great).
More fucking sick stories please. Also yes on the Daisy diaries, although now that I am looking in your post history, it already is. I think chapter 5 was the least fun chapter because of the sudden shift in the dynamic.
Can’t wait to see how Alex fucks with Jasmine now that she’s her thrall. God I live how fucked he is
Just so you know, I've come back and reread this series like 5 times. It's so very freaking good.
This is genuinely good and it would be fabulous to see more from this universe. The story is so unique and well written that I’ve read it even when I’m not horny.
That being said, the “hope 2020 goes well for you” at the end made me shudder.
Yeah... that line didn't age too well, did it? Lol I still kind of laugh at myself when I reread it.
This is one of my favourite stories on this site. I really hope you’re still working on the story continuing
I am, actually! Just in a different sense lol. I'm working on getting a version of the story published, which is why I haven't been posting things on here quite as much.
The end note made me realize why this story constantly seemed to remind me of Yours series despite so little similarity. Great story. Gonna read the sequel next, if I can take it.
I’m confused, he was mad she ate those dudes because it would attract attention so he…has her eat the whole town, which would attract a lot more attention?