All Comments on 'Corrupting the Innocent: Lisa 01'

Great take on the corrupting theme. Hope you take it to another level.

Love the dominatrix side in Lisa, following this one!

need more chapters

For your first story, very good start. Hopefully ratchet up the humiliation a bit more. Excellent length of chapter and good pace.

very good start to a lovely journey, nice background to their relationship and looking forward to her receiving more piercings

I love the build up - very hot