All Comments on 'Cory & Tyler's Weekend Camping Trip'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More sex dialogue please!

Hot story, man. Love the male bonding and double vaginal - my favorite kinks, by far haha. I think it would be even hotter if the guys were talking about what they were doing as they were doing it. So like, "come stick your dick next to mine, bro" or like "this pussy is so tight with both of our cocks in here!". That and with more graphic descriptions of the sex acts would really spice this story up I think. So like, "he slowly pushed into her pussy alongside his best friend's cock. 'Fuck,' he thought, 'our cocks look so fucking good crammed in here.' He started thrusting faster and his balls slapped wetly against Cory's with every thrust." Etc. the details would really bring it to life! Anyway, like I said, fuckin great subject matter and I can't wait for more :)

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