All Comments on 'Couch Time with My Bestie'

by Cunning_Linguist_69

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great work! Five stars!

lc69hunterlc69hunter9 months ago

love a man not ashamed to go down

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Very hot little story. Delightful and fun to read! Thanks

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Nice premise.

Since they were both virgins, it could have used more 'discovery' of each other's bodies. More involvement of her breasts. And her ass.

Some dialog about whether they realy didn't imagine/fantasize about each other when masturbating, and if they did/had, what they'd imagined.

Some titty fucking conneceted with the blowjob would have been a plus.

Some exploration of his balls, and learning how different things done to them brought different reactions.

The pinky in the asshole seemed a bit early in their sexual relationship.

Nevertheless, Five Stars.

Cunning_Linguist_69Cunning_Linguist_699 months agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments.

I was thinking about writing a parallel piece from her POV...

Tripper_DudeTripper_Dude9 months ago

Hot take on the connection between two people and one person losing their virginity. Very hot

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great story!! I also like your idea of a parallel piece from her POV. Sounds like it'd be great as well. 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Campus77Campus776 months ago

A quick fun story. I agree a POV sequel from her would be fun too. I'd like to know why she decided to take their relationship to the next level. I like a woman who makes the first move. Powerful!

Hotstuff1PHotstuff1P5 months ago

Super hot. Friends now lovers ❤️ beautiful sexy erotic fun hot.

raucousraucous4 months ago

I love the progression on this one. Each step didn't feel that big but she certainly knew where they were headed, despite his being slow picking up on it. It would indeed be interesting to see it from her POV.

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