by Cunning_Linguist_69
Nice premise.
Since they were both virgins, it could have used more 'discovery' of each other's bodies. More involvement of her breasts. And her ass.
Some dialog about whether they realy didn't imagine/fantasize about each other when masturbating, and if they did/had, what they'd imagined.
Some titty fucking conneceted with the blowjob would have been a plus.
Some exploration of his balls, and learning how different things done to them brought different reactions.
The pinky in the asshole seemed a bit early in their sexual relationship.
Nevertheless, Five Stars.
Thanks for the comments.
I was thinking about writing a parallel piece from her POV...
Hot take on the connection between two people and one person losing their virginity. Very hot
Great story!! I also like your idea of a parallel piece from her POV. Sounds like it'd be great as well. 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
A quick fun story. I agree a POV sequel from her would be fun too. I'd like to know why she decided to take their relationship to the next level. I like a woman who makes the first move. Powerful!
I love the progression on this one. Each step didn't feel that big but she certainly knew where they were headed, despite his being slow picking up on it. It would indeed be interesting to see it from her POV.