by MarkeySan
Liked it until the ending. I've nothing against incest, but don't like how the son was tricked into fucking his mother
It was a good story for the most part. But sorry for the 3 stars, the ending just about ruined it for me. Not only do I not agree with the rape aspect of the story, but the whole humiliation and betrayal of his friend was equally as bad and compared to how you portrayed him earlier in the story, it all seemed incredibly out of character. But hey it's your story and that's just my opinion.
It was my second story and I’ve learned a lot since. Thanks for the comment. I hope my more recent stories are more to your liking.