All Comments on 'Could She Be Mine?'

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Damned_YankeeDamned_Yankeeover 3 years ago
Very nicely done

Nice story, well told. Good dialogue. Reasonably well edited. Write more!

CasyWoodsCasyWoodsover 1 year ago

I Want One of Those.!.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That was a nice build up and some good sex!

Sir GalahadSir Galahad7 months ago

Needs some help with punctuation, but a good story. Mina is a delight!

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