All Comments on 'Counsellor'

4 stars. It's a good story if rather short so I would like to see more chapters. But it ain't incest. 5 stars had it been longer and in the right category

What is this??? It's not really a story because there's no plot. There is no dialogue. There is no character development. It looks like a scene from a story - a story that you failed to write.

The observations are absolutely correct and fully justified. I had no idea it had actually posted as I'd experienced a few problems. I will address this.

I'm working on the completed works on behalf of a valued friend. Its his story. I will always acknowledge feedback, and I'm sharing the sexual moments for reaction; I'm not sure I can share the full detail but I will attempt to share more dialogue. He is highly unusual, has an innate ability to simply understand women, desire, secrets. This initial post was an old first draft and I will make every effort to share more. Forgive me, it was never intended as 'incest' (perhaps I incorrectly tagged that) although as an observation, he has experienced orgasm as a young boy at the hands of his aunty.