All Comments on 'Country Girl Ch. 01'

Can't wait for Part 2.

Eagerly awaiting part 2.

Now to figure out how to know when Ch 02 arrives. 4* for encouragement.

Excellent beginning, hope we don’t have to wait long for next chapter

It seems Nils and Britt are slowly developing an interest in love for each other. She is lovely in a way other than physical beauty, and he is smart enough to see that. When she DOES see him stripped of his clothes, please make him a man's man and give him a dusting of good chest hair she can stroke and kiss. They will go far!

I’m enjoying this story and you write well. Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing it.

@ReedRichards, you have a lot of nerve critiquing others, when YOUR 'writing' needs a lot of revisions, far more than this, what was that garbage you just posted anyway?

The budding love between Britt and the lead character is flowing nicely. The situation with Yanne seems a bit cliche, but a nice side-story. I think there were numerous errors that did tend to slow the reading down, as I tried to mentally fix them as I read. I suggest you get someone else to proof your story, or at the very least read it out loud once, all the way through, before submitting. You will be shocked how many errors you can find on your own that way.

Thanks for sharing.

Enjoyable read. Looking forward to more of these two. Bravo

Like the story, being a farm boy it hits a bit home.

Um, all of the Farmall M's I've ever drove or seen don't have fenders. ;-)

Still a great read.

Nydelig Piker Janne er meget bra!

Hallo, Janne! Hva vil du med meg? :+))

What can I say, but another great start to an interesting story. Heading to chapter 2.

Great start and I'm looking forward to the rest of this story.

He's going slow with his wife, er future wife, the one the kids call MOMMY, the greatest name a woman can have...

If country bumpkins are calling this girl ugly then she must be beat as hell cause how in the world would a (relatively) thin, single, "plain jane" not have plenty of suitors out there? They don't exactly have as many options as the city.