by R410a
What a wonderful love-making! Nils and Britt's preparation is so tender and loving, almost a step by step tiptoeing into love. I like their tender undressing of each other, and the actual making love. Nils' chest hair is appropriate for a sexy young man of 31. I hope further chapters develop their descriptions more. Like to see Nils described as the hairy-chested (dark haired blonde?) handsome man that I think he is. Britt has found herself a real treasure in Nils. The see a beauty deep within each other that transcends any outside detail!
Get them married to each other and their sexual appetites going in full gear. Britt's mom was a great help in encouraging her daughter, but Nils has been very kind, compassionate, and tender. It's s good thing Britt loses her virginity to Nils because he will spoil her now.
Can't praise this story or your writing enough!
Dam, it was like I was right there with them, breath taking, to say the least. Great writing and wonderful story.
And I’m reminded of the old song “Never make a pretty woman your Wife”, good story so far, I’m interested to see where this is going, although I suspect it’s a HEA with Grandkids.
Is it difficult to write an interesting romantic stories without sexual assault? First two paragraphs in page one and I'm dropping this series.
"...Yanne had apparently gotten the news I was courting Britt, her calls and texts stopped..."
OK, considering what's going on at this point, Nils should have already told her they could be friends, but the benefits were suspended until further notice.