by cfumago
Now your going strong. I like the way this story is going. I'm liking the characters more now that they are more involved in the story. I like the flow and the few minor errors I see do not take away from the story. Keep up the dialogue between the characters as I think this makes the story more interesting. I look forward to seeing where you take this. Thanks for your time and imagination.
Nice to have feedback.
I'm a new author so all comments are appreciated: thank you.