All Comments on 'Country Loving Pt. 01'

by Originsunknown

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Omart57Omart57almost 4 years ago
Great story-

Dude! You had me worried with the joke they pulled on him. Lol. Then it was funny A-F! Keep em cumming!

scipioparkinsscipioparkinsalmost 4 years ago
If Marcus ...

Had only had sex once, how did he know how quickly doggy made him cum?

Apart from a couple of 'continuity' issues - not bad.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
My 2 cents

I liked the story with the two cousins. I think you should have stayed with them. You could have concentrated on them. Let them explore each other and have fun. A good story line, just not done right. That's my 2 cents, for what's it worth. Thanks for the effort.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Almost there

Would have been five stars had you gone the man on man angle. Very entertaining story otherwise!

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 3 years ago

Was really good until the uncle joined in.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Three stars lost by adding the uncle. More kinks is not better.

OldUncleAlOldUncleAlover 2 years ago

Close! I was ready to go look for a new story when the pooper poking started! That was a very original twist, saying it was a prank.Still, I am not a fan of father daughter. Maybe because Old Al’s farher was such an asshole, who knows. So we shall see what happens next.

Al

Lee2012Lee2012almost 2 years ago

Great premise till uncle joined in. Liked the solo cock/multiple pussies angle. Even with the prank, 4*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

lolol,, good read,,reeally enjoyed this one,,well written, very erotic,, ending was delightful!!!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Really liked this story. Was hoping Marcus and Pete were really going to do it.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Loved it! More PLEASE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Why is family fucking so popular? That's an evil ball if yarn not even a cat would play with.

OriginsunknownOriginsunknownabout 2 months agoAuthor

"Why is family fucking so popular? That's an evil ball if yarn not even a cat would play with"

I think I speak for most who enjoy these, they pull on that part of your morals that know it's so wrong but you can't help getting excited by them. It's fiction to enjoy in private then go about your day. Or, scroll past, call it whatever and still enjoy your day ☺️

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...

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