All Comments on 'Country'

Very nice. I dident see any errors in it. Very nice work.

Wow!! This story was GREAT. You, so far, are a GREAT writer. Thank you for sharing.

Go back and edit your story.

Slow down and introduce the characters properly, attaching their names so we have a picture of who is who. When he walks in to the kitchen spend more time introducing the wife, describing her carefully and mentioning her name.

You see a girl out the window and then we are meant to know who is who at the table? Sorry but I stopped reading at that point. I'm sure it might become obvious if I persevered but why make it hard for your readers?