All Comments on 'Couples Fantasy Party Pt. 02'

by soonerj35

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DunkirkDunkirkabout 5 years ago
Party

They need to have more parties like this one

zooliciouszooliciousabout 5 years ago
Nice

Cameras in rooms. Fucking hot idea.

techreadertechreaderabout 5 years ago
Cameras

Cameras in the rooms; GREAT fantasy idea, TERRIBLE reality. That would be hacked SO FAST that the videos would be up on YouPorn before any of them made it home.

Still, WONDERFUL fantasy.

Next meeting; all threesomes. Half MFM, half FMF. Maybe even swap around at midnight.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This story was sexy and fun (and very exciting). If things like this really happen I would love to be invited! The only problem I had was with your lack of editing. Spell check is not editing! When there is a mistake made it puts the wrong word in place, while the word you intended gets lost. You might consider working on your grammar and spelling, too. These things detracted from the story for me, but I still thought it was hot.

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