All Comments on 'Couples Party Contest'

I'd like to attend that party.

Very easy reading yet still captures all the elements of first time swinging.

The only thing missing in this story was the possible impregnating by some cock that the recipient was not married to.

Great flow in the story, leading to the end. Even with the ending, it leads into a future story where the females get their turn at a similar contest. That should be a great follow up to this story.

Amazing: I just saw the first line of the comment about impregnation and thought "[Don87654]" - and I was dead right. Nice to see a man who knows what he likes, and is prepared to bore the rest of us to death going on about it.

I can't help but wonder what his problem is. Obviously he has one.

This was a pretty good story. I liked the idea, but the dialog occasionally turned toward "nobody talks like that."

I see a solid future in your writing; keep up the good work! As for you, Don, while I understand that both the thrill and emotional satisfaction of fatherhood is a powerful feeling, you seem to be more obsessed with it than the average fellow. Calm down! Oh, and FYI, I don't think anyone has ever been impregnated by giving a blow job.

I agree that sometimes the dialog was a little awkward, but people in that situation for the first time would probably feel awkward. I think it would be awesome to add a chapter where the guys had to tell their girls apart in the same fashion. As for Don - you DEFINITELY cannot get pregnant from a blow job.

Very well written amusing hot story. reminded me of the seventies. That great time after the PILL and before AIDS. When women dressed to show everything. This was a very popular game game, almost as popular as musical cocks(think chairs).

Woulda been less limp dick without all the spelling, grammar mistakes, and mixed up details. I wondered how Mandy got Rod and Mark all the way down her throat at the same time? Must be some throat....

Great thrilling story; where's the sequel?

I want to be involved in a party like this!