All Comments on 'Cousin Jane'

Loved it!

I really enjoyed this, keep it up.

I loved the very slow descriptive build up, and then the full on passion

A fine job of capturing the love between college-age cousins. Will there be further installments?

5 stars! I really liked the way it was written and could relate to the theme. My wife and I , although not related, lived together for almost two years before getting married. Her parents weren't too pleased about cohabitating while engaged because they caught us twice as we were fucking our brains out.

I liked it. A lot. One of the better, by far, incest stories.

Great job keep it going.

Fantastic I hope the story continues

I enjoyed the build up and was a fun read.

Great story, these are fantasy, sweet innocence, one thing for sure if you stuck your cock in ass without pre-cleaning then there would be no way you would be woken by a blow job... Still give you 5, cos I did my cuz one new years eve, fond memory.

More please, such a sexy tale needs to show us what happens from here? I do recall her father cautioning him about ogling his daughter so how is he going to react if she turns up pregnant and they get married?

Page 5 really brings it home, it would have felt incomplete without it!

5 Stars! Loved the build up and chars, please continue the story!

Thanks for a great story that is well written I enjoyed reading it through a couple of times and I look forward to reading more from you.

Loved it, cute ending as well.

Spectacular! But I disagree with sir wood cutter…. Totally disagree ;) 😉

Loved this

I need more, write up a part 2

Don't stop now. I want more

This is a lovely story of a wonderful love affair, maybe leading to something longer-term? I wish I'd had a sexy cousin in college to spend time with, too.

Awesome story!! A second chapter (or more) would be well received, ( just sayin :- ) Thanks for sharing a fine piece!

Very well written. Jane’s a reminder of my own cousin many years ago.

Although the pursuit and outcome differ. Hot as hell plot. Definitely worthy of a follow up chapter!

This was a fun story to read. It was well paced with good development of both plot and character.

Two small faults on page 4:

(1) they fall asleep after doing anal, then she wakes him up with a blowjob? Uugh. No mention of at least cleaning him up with a warm washcloth first? Jane's character doesn't fit with unhygienic skank!

(2) Also on page 4: "but I lied awake for some time, the realization that ..." The past tense of lie (as in to recline) is LAY, not lied. He lay awake for some time.

Lied is past tense for speaking a falsehood.

A nice story line but it would flow better if less sentences started with 'I'. Overuse can get repetitive and risks reading like a 'what I did in the holidays' essay.

I loved this. In some ways I would love a sequel, but I appreciate that deciding which direectiin to take the story in isn’t simple. Great story.

Very hot story indeed! I'm signing this anonymous but I have a profile here Luv8ters2. Also, because you need to hear 1 more grammar correcting reader, 😂 page 3 the word habit is shown as habbit 🧐😉 I still give five stars who cares about such small errors, it was still hot ass story! Thanks!

Honestly a part 2 is definitely needed💜

Really good story and sex scenes. Also, the happy ending was a nice touch. Great work.

ok so my brother married our 1 st cousin its legal here they have 5 children they are all fine great kids great story maybe follow up kids partership 5 stars