All Comments on 'Cousin Pt. 03'

Though I'm not really into the Bd scene, this story was quite exceptional in riding the boundary between sexy bondage sex play and pure sadism. I really enjoyed the very real interaction between all the characters, and the sensual blending of giving and recieving verious pleasures. Very nicely written and enjoyable!

Great story line. Too bad stuff couldn't happen in real life like this. Kept interest. Scenes flowed together well. Good use of descriptions. Keep it up.

"Before last week I'd only played a few spanking games, but I'll admit I have a rich fantasy life. Not as good as this reality, but rich. And I do read a lot."

Yes. It shows.

Unrealistic, way too long for the content.

This could have been written in 1500 words. 'Verbose' does not equal 'convincing'.

'Well written' does not equal 'Hot'.

i cant believe i have been spending my entire day reading this story! just like a book you cant put down. really you should look into publishing this for mass distribution!

Just because it's long and takes all day to read, doesn't automatically qualify it as a work worthy of mass production. I am an editor of just such books and this would not qualify.

There is little here that is original. Though it is well written, the author needs to stretch himself.

With these multi-part stories it is important that there is a link to the next part at the end of each section. These are missing in your new format. So in my opinion your new format sucks and has made your new format less useful. Unless you put the next section next to the previous section in the main selections your new format is useless. I know of one story I was reading that doesn't do this and is thus useless. Put the damn links back in!

I read the whole story in one sitting. It was great. Thank you very much

Leo - Brisbane, Australia - LBurke@nanning.com.au