All Comments on 'Cousin's First Time'

Wonderful for a 1st-time effort. Always like to encourage new writers and yours is very well word-crafted. Clearly quite short with only a suggestion of an ending, but that is all we need in this story. Do keep 'em coming.

Love it, I had played plenty of sex games with my oldest boy and girl cousins before I hit puberty. Played around with both of them for years

Too short...........

Show and tell?

And so much more.

Dana's got a project and you have tremendous potential.

Well crafted, keeping us on the edge and panting for the neck chapter.

Great length, almost as long as a teenager might last, especially with Dana, and possibly Trina educating him.

Good start to what could a hot sexy story if you write some more about these getting together.

Now that was a damn good start, in a nice style ... that ain't broke, so don't fix it. Grammar and punctuation count too. Pay attention to them.

Very well done. I'm hoping you continue.....

Ok.

Let’s get ready for some fun.