All Comments on 'Coven's Toy Pt. 05'

Loved it. 5 stars!!

I have found this story incredibly erotic and imaginative from the start. I was somewhat surprised at the way Elizabeth has little to no sympathy for what happened to Tammy and actually seems to take joy in much of her misery with the attitude of how it isn’t so bad but then admits that it isn’t something she would like because of course she is so different than her sisters which is becoming increasingly hard to believe. I love how I find myself so deeply drawn into the story that I end up getting emotional over characters in a story but that is just another credit to you and your wonderful abilities as an author. I still look forward to more chapters and get so excited when I see one posted. Thanks again.

J.D.

Thoroughly enjoying this story and your decision to concentrate the recent chapters on the relationship between the two main characters is a good one. I do like the writing technique of aligning the reader with Elizabeth as Tammy relates her adventures. Looking forward to the ogoing development of the story

Love the story, keep doing the awsome job 😁👍

5 stars

Bespite two things :

-There is no Henry the eighth of France, and Henry the eighth of England lived 200 or 300 years before Marie-Antoinette. You might have thought of Louis the sixteenth.

-The lack of sympathy of Beth toward Tammy adventures is surprising. And Beth seem surprised. What happened to the previous toys ? Is Tammy the first one ?