All Comments on 'Coven's Toy Pt. 07'

I feel like this is more like a story of how a victim of torture recounts their experiences to the one that caused their torturer

It's all got pretty heavy. Poor Tom, how fucked up is his life now.

I have been thinking about this story quite a bit and I was wondering why more questions were not asked before the transformation. I would ask if they did this before and what happened to the others and then I would ask for them to give me 1 request that they could not refuse after the two years service had ended. I would think that just blindly jumping into anything is a terrible idea let alone something as monumental as this. I would like to see if they either refused or if they did agree, what limitations would be imposed. That would tell you all you need to know about their intentions and trustworthiness or at the least it would give you a better feel for them. Always remember that there are worse things than death. The story was still incredible and I deeply enjoyed each chapter. Thanks

I'm sorry if you don't appreciate Tammy (Tom's) adventures. I designed this story to cover as many fantasies as I could in a single tale. It was a challenge for me to imagine and describe so many different fetishes - I'm certainly no expert...

I assumed that any given reader would find some fetish(s) they would like, and be able to tolerate others as being short-lived (only a month, or two.)

And I, I believe that's a key point. After paying her debt (one way of looking at it) Tammy (Tom) is free to enjoy her new life. Comfortably and I would expect happily.

As for 'looking a gift horse in the mouth'. How could Tom, possibly refuse, or even think of bargaining? The Coven's research supposedly identified him as a guy interested in fetishes and fantasies. And, he had very little to lose - his life was basically over when they contacted him.

In any case, the last chapter is in the works, and in it I hope you will find some acceptable closure.

he has been told to do "everything" what will be "asked" from him/her before he agreed to be transformed - so as in so many other stories here on Lit... characters agree to become a kind of participator in kinky or eaven cruel "games", also without knowing the exact consequences of their agreement. In Tom's case, eaven if he/she has to suffer for most of the two years, as it is mostly only his own phantasy becomming true, there is this a bright light at the end of the tunnel, which promisses a good and long life with no - almost no trouble (exept the little bit mean permanent horniness I agree) - with all the other modification, to be able to reverse - eaven if some may take (long) time. But as the author also metioned - after all it's only a tale - and really by the setup of the story with all the different fetishes to satisfy, a brilliant idea to bring it to an comprehending setting with the sisters of a very special coven. I, for myself can't wait for the continuing of the story and the thrilling aspects the author puts in - hopefully there are more - much more - to come, from the next ten months of Tammies journey.

Keep going and surprise us (the readers) with more of Your splendid ideas (excuse my English, it's not my first language) JtL