All Comments on 'COVID Birthday Swap Pt. 03'

The plot device of a 'trade' is clever, in that it allows you to cover the same scenario from two different perspectives. At least, that's the potential, and you took advantage of it. The interaction between Kelly and Michael is different from that between Tara and Mark. This could lead to different outcomes, and the different outcomes could lead to a conflict that requires resolution. So, lots of potential to take advantage of (or not).

For this story, Michael challenged the word 'goal', and Kelly correctly replies "You're right -- terrible word," Kelly said.

Considering that Kelly is basically getting into Tantra massage territory here, Michael might also want to challenge Kelly's use of the word 'playground'.

Enjoyable read with the potential to go many directions.

Thank youi.