by Risktaker48
So Dawn and Cliff have no final talk? She truly wanted Reece more? That's sad to see.
I am not going to read the 1st 5 parts because this is a very satisfying conclusion. Send the cheating skank to prison, destroy her and all who conspired with her making the revenge a long term event to be savored for years to come. This chapter alone is one of the best I have read on this cuck happy site.
This story goes to show that you shouldn’t be writing a grocery list, let alone an erotic story.
Do you have any idea how hard it is to “seed a cell phone with spyware and malware”? If you have an Apple Air tag on you long enough, your cell phone will alert you to the fact that an unidentified tracking device is on you and has been tracked.
Of course you don’t know this because you’re not interested in writing a jerk story, you want to punish women. You want the wonderful husband to “get the girl, the gold watch and everything”. You wanted to write a Disney story for guys.
You wanted the mean, nasty girl to be punished and the husband to live his best life, surrounded by friends, family, hot women and money.
No final conversation with Dawn? Felt totally unresolved. Magically a new girlfriend with benefits appears and Dawn goes to prison, the end? You have got to be kidding! 6 chapters for that ending?
Not my cup of tea.
Cant say I hated it but I cant really say I liked it. It was just sort of there.