by Bn2f
Now that was intensely erotic and so heartbreaking. In a short space you created two different characters in a tragically poignant, romantic relationship; the beginning and the ending hard to put into words, so you had your desired effect. Have read a couple of your other pieces, including the Thorogood titled story (love that song and enjoyed the story), but this piece was far and away … . Will likely read again despite knowing the end — that good. 5 stars hands down.
Christ...sure didn't see that coming...
LOVED Maddie..
some of the story I stumble on here are incredible..this is one of them
very heavy/sad story
5 and fave...special niche of All-Time Best folder along with one other lesbian along similar vein