All Comments on 'Crash And Burn Pt. 01'

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MigbirdMigbirdover 2 years ago

Now that was intensely erotic and so heartbreaking. In a short space you created two different characters in a tragically poignant, romantic relationship; the beginning and the ending hard to put into words, so you had your desired effect. Have read a couple of your other pieces, including the Thorogood titled story (love that song and enjoyed the story), but this piece was far and away … . Will likely read again despite knowing the end — that good. 5 stars hands down.

Candy_Kane54Candy_Kane54about 2 years ago

Lovely, heartbreaking story. I'm glad you shared it with us.

roveroneroveronealmost 2 years ago

Christ...sure didn't see that coming...

LOVED Maddie..

some of the story I stumble on here are incredible..this is one of them

very heavy/sad story

5 and fave...special niche of All-Time Best folder along with one other lesbian along similar vein

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