All Comments on 'Cravings'

Short but sweet....

Great change of heart!

5

That one moved so fast I'm out of breath! Most of your normal sex scenes are longer than that! J/K!

Take care and keep writing please! Tell Fun the SAGE said hi!

Cheers

SAGE

Will do, Sage. Thanks!

I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing. Five stars.

Loved the story! In my case, it wouldn't work. Wife would never talk to me again if we divorced. LOL. Cheers. Frankie

Well crafted, as always. These shorties are a little more difficult, I think.

Aw, enjoyed your story. xox

10 Big Blazing Stars for a Sweet short story. Plus you are totally correct, ain't no pussy sweeter than the "ex's" pussy. Except maybe if you have talked her into one last time after she announced that she is leaving you forever, after this last fuck.LOL Fun Story. Thanks, for the Effort. Thanks, for the smile. Buster2U

IDK. I need to know how long there were apart, why, was it really his kid.... Not sure why but I just need to know.

hard to think of this with a romance, with no real understanding of why they broke up the first time.

I think I need to know why they divorced in the first place. Was the issue of kids?

Very nice, but a bit hard to accept without a LITTLE backstory.

I love happy endings!

Too short. Too bang-bang.

Why were they divorce? How about a prequel.

Lacked a little depth and a bit predicable, but not bad. Writing style was solid throughout. 4.1*

This was for the 750 word project, which doesn't allow for much back story. It is a fun challenge for the authors though, to try and squeeze a complete story into exactly 750 words.

And I'm glad so many of you enjoyed it.

He saw, he came, poof fatherhood. Enough said.

Nice, but doesn’t really work as a 750 word story. As others have said, we need more of the back story to understand the situation. Not possible in 750 words.

I like it! I've never tried a 750-word story Hell, I wrote a 3,000+ word sex scene the other day! Good on you. Keep it up!

Why’d they divorce? What brought them together this day? Thanks for the effort but this doesn’t make it to story status.

Hi, S&F, I missed this one. Sweet and sexy tale that offers hope for a better future for them than their first go round since they have to work together for themselves and their baby. Very nice job.

We readers can be pretty lazy - to put it politely - as all we have to do is dream ofthe two 'exes' good luck in their re-connection., empathize with their redistovery, - or even be narcissistic by putting ourselves in their place. I certainly am (after myumpteenth re-reading). This is a 750 word dream and I am sure it will give me happy thoughts until I stop having thoughts (which I hope is never). Thank you for a grown-up fairytale. It beats Cinderella, hands down! Now, where do I find one of these life vignettes for myself? Dream on. A 5 does not express the expertise and fun behind this story.