by PeytonMirabelle
I don't play the video games but do have the miniatures game version. I would say you have hit the mythology pretty well. Very fun read and the adventuring was done well.
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I laughed at the last line. Preston's my favorite NPC because he has one of the rarest traits in the series - eternal optimism.
The best praise I can offer is - this felt exactly like a potential DLC taking place after the main quest was finished. And it makes me want to play the game again.
Oh, God. I can hear that last line, even though I haven't played in months.
Thoroughly enjoyed this - well written, got the 'universe' down pat, and entertained me. Great job.
This was fantastic. It felt like like a quest line in the game. Please write more!
Absolutely amazing! I love Fallout and this was such a great read. Very well written and I could picture the whole thing unfolding as it moved through loved and hated places.
I can't remember how many times I blasted the Institute out of the grounds and started the game again with a different approach. It was so much fun to read this story....I love it. May we read more of those two??
Absolutely loved your storyline. Even the sexy time was done well and I imagined the XP boost. It was fun to fantasize about being the wastelander and hearing all of our favorite characters and locations.
How about a new Vegas story next. Perhaps from a Former Gomorra Girl or a NCR trooper.