All Comments on 'Crazy For Her'

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cantbuymycantbuymyalmost 12 years ago
great story

will read it again and again - 5.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
love it!!!

Please write more interratial romance story. Really like this...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great!

This was definitely one of the better and more well developed stories I've read on this site. I've never written a comment on here before, but felt compelled. Excellent job!

MadameblaqueMadameblaquealmost 12 years ago

I love the build up between Aiden and Skylar. You really took your time with them and that made the story even better. Great ending!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
OMG!!!

I am still trying to catch my breath...5 stars and then some!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Loved it!

I enjoyed the build-up you created between Aiden and Skylar. Write more like this.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 11 years ago
Worth

the wait for both of them and the climax of an ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Velouria

Love love love!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
MORE! MORE!

DONT STOP KEEP THIS STORY GOING THIS STORY IS TOOOO GOOD TO BE WASTED!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DONT STOP! I LOOOOOVE EEEET!!

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

What didn't this chick have pierced

KittyOh48KittyOh48about 10 years ago
TOO HOT!

Sexy, hot, made me sweat! Please give me more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Amazing

This is just amazing, need more

Cocoa_CureCocoa_Cureover 9 years ago
Great story!

A good build up to the finale!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I gave up!

When I read the line that said "I looked to see why I was starring!" I gave up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Loved it!!

I need part 2, 3 & 4!!!

illwindillwindalmost 6 years ago

Desperately needs an edit. Or maybe a rewrite. Verb tense was all mixed up, dialogue was stiff(almost comically so), and they only seem to deserve each other because no one else should have to put up with them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Whoa!

MAN, I loved that!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Not great.

Not well written I am afraid.

All over the place and came off a bit childishly written.

Also, wasn't it supposed to be a sex story, not much sex in it.

The whole thing was kind of disappointing and dare I say mind numbingly tedious.

Maybe you should rewrite it. I have read other stories of yours, so I know you can do better. This effort was not one of them.

curiousaudreycuriousaudreyalmost 3 years ago

Aiden is one grimy cracker chile

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was a good story,and I'm glad that it ended the way it did,,,And I know that the story could hve gone a dozen different ways,but it ended up in a good way,,,

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBBalmost 2 years ago

Hmmmmm Aidan was a tedious prick and should have just been left jacking himself off.

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

[08.08.22]

Fun story!

11/10!!!!!

bigurnbigurn9 months ago

He is a total dickhead and she is a teasing bitch. He is possessively obcessive about her and she likes stringing several guys along, at the same time. No way that this mess works out. 3 stars for trying...

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