by TechnoCarwash
...is waiting for a follow-up, or continuation!!!
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Nicely done. Want more!
Without question one of the most difficult stories to try and keep the characters straight in my mind.<BR><BR>Remember, less is MORE!
I agree with you there. It was even confusing at times for me to remember who was doing what. I think this is my least favorite story that I've written (although, I've only written three). This one probably could have used more of a plot too instead of just mainly sex.
You're still at bat . So more plot next time? OK but don't let up on the sex. That's the best part of your writing. Now get busy and give us more. Plot AND sex.