All Comments on 'Crazy Uncle Ed Ch. 01'

Can't wait for more.

I lobed how this is developing.

I hope you don't keep us waiting too long.

Imaginative!

so the uncle was a white racist abuser, remains to be seen if the new guy is any different or simply a black racist abuser..

Writing is OK, not great not terrible, this would have made a decent non consent story but does suffer if posted as bdsm.

He is far to casual with his fists, statements like " I backhanded her" and "white trailer trash" just don't sit right with the notion of consent.

The changes in verb tense from past to present are a little off-putting, and there were a few clerical errors that a careful proofread should have caught. The tone is familiar, but extraordinarily nonchalant for such serious circumstances. Not bothered by the racial thing. But it all seems so impersonal. The character seems more taken aback by meetings with the accountants than to find his assistant is the corporate whore.