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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This story would be good if it had punctuation

You should also proofread it. I'm not sure your wife, Julie (not Jodie) would approve of things like "praying cum" and "thirty dog" and leaving her real name in because your find and replace button doesn't recognize her name in the possessive form.

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