All Comments on 'Cream Puff Ch. 04'

by RubixStu

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sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 5 years ago
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Why couldn't you leave this in Trans/Gay/BDSM?

One star.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I finally figured out what made me dislike this so much

I don't like the female characters, I don't like the male characters (there aren't any), I don't like the story line, and I don't have any respect for the author's inability to write7

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Just stopped in to drop this off...

1*

I guess for some this might be erotic.

Although, thank you for putting it in the title & description.

Didn't have to read through a pile of excrement, before leaving a 1 star.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Useful story

for bringing the damaged cuck males out of the woodwork. Please don't reproduce

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
re:fermat

really, that's your rating, here's mine, garbage=one star

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Well I'm the running

For worst story of the year thus far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

stupid man get the hell out nothing there for you you will just get the shit beat out of you grow some balls move out the bitch you are with isn't worth it there others out there that will take you she knew what you had before you wed she should have left you then now it is her bad

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
OH come ON!

I can't believe you're SO stupid as to post this garbage in the loving wives section unless your intention was to troll the readers. This garbage belongs in fetish or non-con or in the "stupid shit" category. The writing was awful and the characters so unlikable that if anyone of them had died i would have applauded. You're going to get killed in this category and justifiable so.

1 star only because negative stars aren't available - YET!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
You need to learn how to write!

Why not spend a bit of time learning how to really write? Nobody who isn't illiterate trash will want to read your stories until you do.

Claudia69Claudia69almost 5 years ago
Loving Wife??

Not sure the story is the right section,but I thought it was a good kinky read..I wish my wife would use a strap-on to fuck my asshole!!!!

EugeneSelfishEugeneSelfishalmost 5 years ago
Over the top!

So depraved, I love it!

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