All Comments on 'Critical Response Ch. 03'

Pieces of the varied aspects of your talent are revealed through this light-hearted, yet introspective piece. This is fun, clever and a refreshing read.

Thanks!! See AlinaX's https://www.literotica.com/s/a-lively-tale-indeed for more of the (meta) context

I member Adam, but Ashley?

I think this story is excellent! Does my vote as a non-member count?

I love these irreverent asides between the author and the characters.

Too many characters? Too many back stories? Hmm, you know there was this guy, Alexandre Dumas?

Fairy tales, not dark? Pre-Disney?

You might put a short, insecure (but getting over it) chessplayer, with an off-the-scale IQ, yet dumb in some ways, burdened with a massively overdeveloped sense of honor that shows on his face, who keeps having beautiful but rather ineligible women coming on to him. Nah, it'd never work.

@chopinesque: watch for Adam. That's all I have to say.

I reread this because of the story you just posted. And after having read all the way up to chapter 14 of Consenting Adults, you really did have an insane amount of this written out. I went to favorite it, but lo and behold, I had already favorited it from my first read. Thank you for writing such a wonderful tapestry on this site Oneagainst. Truly, thank you.