All Comments on 'Crossdressing Son and Dad Pt. 04'

Professional cocksucker,

might I suggest accomplished?

Tense disruptions should be identified during proof read or edit.

Similar for tared / taried ? Spellchecker programme might have a tough time ever on the word, and how used in the sentence.

I admit to being overly generous with a 4 . It'seems just such a great concept, I thought it warranted a little something extra.

This story is so sexy and well written! I've been waiting eagerly for each next installment. Please write more soon! 💖💖

Context would be consistent by making 'tared' into 'stared'. A simple typo error that a basic proofreading would have corrected.

Not the end of the world, but stories that require deciphering are much less boner inspiring (even though I still have one from the other chapters).

Lots of fun taking cock while wearing lingerie.

I am really looking forward to the story continuing.

what a fun story.

I really hope you write a follow-up. Waiting almost a year is killing me.

I very much enjoyed the progression of events it makes the story believable.

Can't wait for the chapter keep up the great work.