All Comments on 'Crossing Lines'

If Steve and Shelly get another chance, probably away from their parents, give a more detailed description of the young lovers. I know Shelly has large breasts and a rounded butt, and Steve probably has a good sized cock. Give that sexy young man some chest hair for that manly chest, and give them another chance to make love. Maybe she can suck him off too.

Love it, they are enjoying their experiments very much. If they go to the same college could they be a couple? Perhaps she is already knocked up. Anxious for some more of this story please.

Yes, a very hot story with so much potential !! Baby sis has big boobs, sexy legs, a nice butt and is so horny for her brother big cock ! Her brother being horny like baby sis; hopefully will get a chance to bang her long and hard without fear of Mom or Dad catching them. Hopefully, baby sis will fall in love and will use protection but become his cock slut. He bangs her well but treats her with respect and she cannot get enough of his big cock and his sweet cum ! Maybe, she'll learn how to take him all the way down her throat and suck him off making him pass out ?? She should rub her pussy juice on his leg or face and rub her big boobs on his face and cock head to see what he does for her ?? Maybe, Mom and Dad will try out the kids too ?? Thank you its very well written.

Good story, I would like to see if Dad changes his view, and if Shelly helps Steve move, and I could go on. Hope there's more!

Soooooooooo unbelievably hot. Please continue, you can't leave us hanging.

Good story with lots of potential for a followup chapter. Shelley and Steve haven't talked about their relationship with each other or where they want it to go. With Steve going off to college and Shelly staying at home it seems like there isn't any mileage in their relationship.

Having been discovered by their Dad it seems unlikely that Shelly will be able to follow Steve and go to the same college as him or even accompany him to the college for a visit when he leaves.

Perhaps the author didn't intend to continue this story and the ending of the of story, with Dad discovering them, leaves it up to us to imagine the obvious ending where Shelley is forced to go to the local college and remain at home keeping her separated from Steve and thus not allowing their relationship to develop beyond a sibling one.

Hope that isn't the case and we get another chapter where Shelly and Steve's relationship is allowed to develop.

Gave it 4 stars only because, from my perspective, the story hasn't finished.

Good story with lots of potential for a followup chapter. Shelley and Steve haven't talked about their relationship with each other or where they want it to go. With Steve going off to college and Shelly staying at home it seems like there isn't any mileage in their relationship.

Having been discovered by their Dad it seems unlikely that Shelly will be able to follow Steve and go to the same college as him or even accompany him to the college for a visit when he leaves.

Perhaps the author didn't intend to continue this story and the ending of the of story, with Dad discovering them, leaves it up to us to imagine the obvious ending where Shelley is forced to go to the local college and remain at home keeping her separated from Steve and thus not allowing their relationship to develop beyond a sibling one.

Hope that isn't the case and we get another chapter where Shelly and Steve's relationship is allowed to develop.

Gave it 4 stars only because, from my perspective, the story hasn't finished.

Hello and thank you for the comments. I've taken them all into consideration as I craft the continuation. This first part was taken from a much longer story I had already written, so no, the story is not over :) However I am giving it a good rewriting because my original just doesn't serve this duo justice.

I hope your're not going to involve mom or dad into this

The love they shsre blossoms during sex