All Comments on 'Crossing the Line'

TSIA

Yes, this IS how it happens. Well done.

This is how it really happens. Without all the porn movie expletives and the hype. A very good, believable story.

This is but one example of complete naturalness. Social morals did not interfere with the absolute feeling of love between two human beings who wanted to lust and love someone not their legal partner(s). Our society needs to readjust itself to allow for this kind of mating to occur and that would eliminate a lot of violence such as recent shootings in Virginia Tech and other colleges and other areas.

This is one of the best stories I've ever read on Literotica. It was realistic, without all of the stereotypical BS. The characters had just the amount of depth needed for this story. It is well written and comes to a good conclusion, leaving the reader to ponder the future.

Well done. 5 + stars.