All Comments on 'Crossroads'

by Dar_Jisbo

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I liked the premise; the plot was not bad; but the prose is strangely cold and the dialogue is odd in places.

2cookies4u2cookies4uover 2 years ago

I really enjoyed this story. I can understand the previous comment but found that like any relationship there takes some time to really know and understand each other. Like Cindy said, she's looking for a relationship not just a one-night stand. I found each was pretty straight forward, Henry knowing what he wanted and found he was lucky to enjoy being with Cindy.

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