All Comments on 'Cruel Bitch gets what she deserves'

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HamsterHamster11 months ago

Well enough written but I had a problem with Chris. BDSM requires quite a bit of sexual experience, first to know whether you re dominant or submissive and second, to know what to do about it. Believability was a stretch for this one.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Too short and where's the rest of the story?

CryingDevil125CryingDevil12511 months ago

What's with you new authors these days thinking you can get away with putting out a couple paragraphs and thinking it can be called a story?

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