All Comments on 'Cruise Ship Fantasies Ch. 01'

Proof Reading Required !

Another aficionado of Literotica.com suggested, and I have frequently offered equal advise . . ,

Record yourself reading your story.

Play the recording while watching your text.

Simply and effectively your Little Missifs will appear, for your correction.

apart from mentioning at start about borrowing pantyhose there is no other mention of pantyhose in the story either of you wearing them or your mother wearing them on the ship or her knowing you took them etc so not sure why its tagged in the pantyhose category so that was a bit frustrating.