All Comments on 'Cruise Ship Passion'

Lovely well told story, hope there is a part 2. Thank you for sharing it 5*

You did a wonderful job with your first Literotica submission! Please write more!

Wow, this was only the first day of the (hoping 14-day) cruise; I hope you give up more about you two. Did the “friendship” continue after the cruise?

Absolutely amazing story, excellent writing, juicy as hell! lol

fantastically told memory.

Wonderful, I thoroughly enjoyed that. If this is your first submission then I must tell you that you most definitely have a talent for erotic storytelling and if this is truly an account of your encounter on the cruise ship then I envy you. Five well deserved stars from me.

Yeah, very good! Especially for a first story, well done.

Amazing story. I hope we get to see more of the cruise trip.

Very good first story.

You have to continue the ...

Very nice; great characters and context rich with possibilities for "new directions." There were hints that Katie was very passionate and thoroughly disappointed with her "guy experiences." Along comes beautiful and persuasive Ashley to gently guide Katie into a passionate erotic encounter such like she has never experienced. I am curiously and ardently looking forward to where LuckyKatie goes with this lovely story.

"such a crazy good experience" -- yes indeed. Obviously Ashley knew what she wanted, but Katie, you gave as good as you got. I love real-life stories. Please continue.

Great writing. I wonder what will happen over the next few days of the cruise

Incredible! Extremely hot. Well told, too. I was glad that Katie was all in, in spite of her lack of prior experience. I also wonder what the rest of the cruise will hold.

Excellent. Would love to hear more!

Lucky Katie alright! Wonderfully detailed lovemaking. perfect.

If this is true then it resembles a couple of stories here. I know. I should name them but unfortunately I don't remember the titles.

Delicious looking forward to reading more of their naughty adventures

This is one of the very best first stories on this site. Absolutely loved it. You captured the tension and passion of the moment. I really hope you continue the story. It sounds like you spent the rest of the cruise in a balcony cabin. Thank you.

Great story!

Hope there are succeeding chapters, as you have a real talent. Would have given you six stars if possible. Eagerly awaiting the next installment!

Great story reall hot

Do write more, this was wonderfully paced and described.

This was a very good story, and had a great ending to support more stories if you wanted to tell. I know i gave it 5 stars, and i would love to read more. I am adding you to my favorite list.

Terrific job…very well done. 5 ⭐️ and added to my favorites list. I’m looking forward to part 2. Thank you.

Great job. Hope to see more from you.

Wow! You are an amazing writer, so sensual and erotic. I so look forward to a part 2 or other stories. You are an incredible writer.

Such a wonderful story! The flow and phrasing was excellent, and you made me feel as if I were there. I very much hope you continue writing here. You are quite talented!!

Hot! Made me want to read more!

Absolutely thrilling & delicious!!

More please!

This story is unbelievably hot! The flow is perfect. ENCORE!

Great story. Loved how it built up.

Great story. I gave you a rating of 4 that would have been a five had both of you been full bush super hairy pussy mounds, like they are "ALLL" SUPPOSED to be! That sill hairless teen age stuff just doesn't work of women.

you write realy well, very nice storie

This is great, so full of joy and wonder. You manage to convey a sense of innocent delight while all being incredibly raunchy. I also admired the misdirection at the beginning. Excellent writing.

Well Katie,

What happened next?

A whole cruise together, was it a fling or more?

You must write and let us know.

Thanks for a lovely romantic story