All Comments on 'Crunch Time - Monday'

You have my attention. 😁

Glad to have caught it, Rob_Royale! This one starts slow but should gather momentum as things spiral. Stay tuned!

Promising start…

Interesting! please continue. Eager to find out what the "allergies" will produce!

Me too! I want dessert.

This is a very interesting premise.

Thanks for the awesome feedback, dearest readers. Tuesday and Wednesday are in the works and getting saucy 😋

A chubby vegan?

I guess I read these out of order, starting with Friday smh. Looking forward to figuring out the cause of your incredibly explicit and laboriously detailed, hedonistic utopia… I’m loving the slow burn in the character development so far… Needless to say, I’ll be binge reading your portfolio of stories over the next several days. Cheers!