by thesinner54
The dialogue reminded me of that episode of Boy Meets World where Shawn and Topanga try to make Cory jealous and fool him into thinking something is going on.
"Do you like what I'm doing to you now?"
"Yes, I do. Do you like this thing I'm now doing?"
"Oh, but I do."
The dialogue kinda made it hard for me to really feel like what was happening in the story made any sense. And the ending? Meh. "
The father in law is a complete lowlife. Really? You’d make a move on your sons wife? I know you’re my daughter in law but look! It’s a big dick! 9” means I’m great in bed. My son is only 7” and as science has taught us, you can’t make a woman orgasm with such a tiny penis. What a guy! Sure, she could have kicked his ass out but again, 9” so you can’t say no to that, right? Just an awful story.