All Comments on 'Crystal the Cleaner Ch. 03'

I enjoy your story, continue it please.

I agree. It's very enjoyable. I cant wait to find out what happens next.

I do have 1 note: It is easier to know which Mr. Miller, Crystal is talking about if you just used their first names. It was very confusing especially in chapter 1. It might also be helpful to put a character list at the top of your story for anyone who starts on chapter 2 or 3 instead of on 1.

Thank you. Really helpful comments

OMG where's the rest!!