by amyhboo
Not really my thing...
But very well written with great description and some hot sex.
I felt very sorry fir the son/boyfriend who’s life is slowly being drawn further into cuckholdery and submission. Will “daddy’s” friend get to sample Rachel and be handed round all of them and get filled with cum before going back to the boyfriends bed?
Great story!! Please write a third chapter. I hope Rachel marries the father and cuts the boyfriend out completely!
love the story, want to see the boyfriend serves Rachel and James together
Okay I think can you make girlfriend less bitch and boyfriend fuck her good?
Actually It will be be more interesting if boyfriend cut that slut off and leave her to fuck his father all the time but then she begin to him because she starting to feeling die inside then come back to beg for boyfriend to comeback to her.
That is a lot more unique and exciting.
Actually It will be be more interesting if boyfriend cut that slut off and leave her to fuck his father all the time but then she begin to him because she starting to feeling die inside then come back to beg for boyfriend to comeback to her.
That is a lot more unique and exciting.
Oh lord. I have a bad feeling Rachel is going to really debauch herself and make the boyfriend feel more jealous and inferior.
But what of Daddy? He's possesive. I mean king ape of this forest.
I foresee drama and plenty of it!
waiting for the 3rd chapter, can you tell me some titles of similar stories?
No story, really. Just a bunch of scenes strung together. The Martian Slut Ray seems to be the most popular plot device in Literotica. StoryTELLING requires one adhere to certain strictures of an.... actual story.
The dad needs a serious fucking talking to. I like the idea of the story but he's a real piece of shit, he could at least be more grateful about it and treat his son nicely instead of being a self entitled asshole. Does he care if his son hates him? Why can't cuckold story characters have some decent fucking writing, especially since this is more of a sharing story than a cuckold story.
This is my favourite thing I have ever read… please tell me there will be a part 3! I’d be so so sad if not! :(
This is my favourite thing I have ever read on any sight? Any update on a part 3 at all? I’d be so sad if this never got more!
A little humiliation can make for a great story but at this point it's beyond stupid. I think the perfect ending would be if They just blatantly started fucking in front of him and laughing he pulled out a shotgun and put it in his mouth and blew his head off. It could end with them fucking over his bloody, headless corpse or something.
Sorry to keep everyone waiting. I do have 2 more chapters fully planned out but I'm struggling to find the time to sit down and write them. I'm hoping maybe over the xmas holidays I will have a chance. Thank you everyone for your interest, it really means a lot that so many people want more of the story!
This really needs more, I have never ready anything like this! please continue it! It is absolutely incredible
Really hoping for more. Always awesome to discover such a good author.
Sorry for the delay everyone. I can assure you I am working on part 3, I'm just struggling to find the time to write it at the moment
We need part 3 soon! I legit check everyday to see if you have posted! It’s the best thing I have ever read!
Sorry everyone I'm not sure if part 3 is going to happen. I have so many ideas for the series but I just can't find the time/motivation to write them down. I've tried writing a bit but can't get into it, and I don't want to force myself into writing it if I'm not going to enjoy doing it. Thank you everyone for your interest though, it means so much that you like what I created. Hopefully one day I'll be able to write more, but don't count on it happening anytime soon. x
Totally understand you stepping away for now! but just wanted to say this is amazing and if you ever do write more, I’ll be first in line waiting to read it!
Really hoping for a return to this story soon! There isn’t even close to another story as good on this theme! Author had captured lightning in a bottle
Waiting for part 3. I foresee a pregnancy coming inbetween Dad and rachel
Part 3?
I'd love to see more dads cum used by the son, or sons lube by the dad
Please tell me that there is a part 3 coming? this is genuinely such amazing writing and story telling!
I really enjoyed this story. "Cuckolded by Dad" has become one of my obsessions over the past year or so (I've tried to write about it myself), but what made this story stand out, for me, was the way the relationships evolved over time in a situation where they all had to deal with each other every day, and how everyone ended up getting what they wanted. Including, I think he eventually realized, the son.
Will there still be more chapters? Genuinely the best story I have EVER found on here! Please please please write more
Can’t wait till chapter 3 hoping to see Racheal suck dads cock at kitchen table for breakfast in front of son or she has to service dad and all his buddies and be their slut to do with as they please
amyhboo I would love to try to write part 3 if you’re not planning on doing it? would anyone else be interested if I wrote it? happy for suggestions or any input thanks
He shud get cucked more often by his gf n made to wear her undies all the time ...lol
I'm looking forward to the BBQ in part 3. Rachel isn't done exploring her slutty side, that's for sure. Bravo. 5*
Really like this story! Do you think it's time for the son to discover a full packet of birth control pills? For whatever reason Rachel has stopped taking them?? Just a thought, I know you've probably got the story more than worked out already!! :P
Dear Author, I'm dying to read what will happen next. This is really exciting. Please can I request for part 3.
idk i cant find this sexual with all the second hand embarrassment im getting from the son
The dialog is so dumb. The characters don't discuss anything at all. Could have been very good, but the presentation is terrible. It's like a set of scenes that have been looked up and copied.
This is the best story I have ever ready PLEASE update us and let us o ow if part 3 will still happen! Any timeline is fine we just need more
In the first chapter, gg was still normal and perceived everything more or less adequately.But every time it gets worse for him, I don't understand why he doesn't break up with her? It's obvious that she doesn't love him. I hope at the end of the story the guy will still leave her and let her live with this guy's father. It would also be nice if he moved away from them and made a career for himself (by finding a decent one. a girl) and telling her his story.
The STORY itself as porn is very good. But of course the father is an asshole (although he tries not to seem like it). Seriously, there are no more girls in the world that you need to fuck your son's girlfriend? (I understand that this is the plot itself) but we just don't see the story from the Father's eyes to finally understand his motive, etc. Maybe he didn't love his wife and that's why he doesn't care about his son? The subject of the father is poorly disclosed.
Noooo... why do all the great ones always forsake us? Please write moar! She needs to get pregnant with daddy's baby.