All Comments on 'Cuckold Coach Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Another One

Unbelievable. Take Ch. 02 somewhere else. Or how about write about an amicable divorce first. Haven't read about something like that in a while. 1* for now.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Trash

Rubbish 1*

TMSPTGR3TMSPTGR3almost 9 years ago
Please Stop Writing

Gag

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
1*

But how many baboons are there?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Embarrassing.

Really pathetic plot, characters, and writing. Why don't you check if McDonald's has some openings? You seem to have an affinity for grease.

impo_61impo_61almost 9 years ago
I agree with @TMSPTGR3...

I agree with @TMSPTGR3...Better stop now than get it worst than this!!! Two little details: 1st - when was said: " Framed diplomas hung on the wall" it should have been: "Phony framed diplomas hung on the wall"!!!; 2nd - When she told him the lover didn't show up, was it true? Or he showed up, fucked her and she lied? 1*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Poorly conceived and badly written

And it really had no point to it. It simply wasn't fun or entertaining to read. Not a decent character in it to care about or root for or against. No stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
hey cuck

ur bio was not worth the read

1*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Don't love the story and I think that if a marriage is getting to the point where as a couple they are looking for others to join in their sex lives than its time for couples counciling. She wants to fuck others than she should file for divorce why totally destroy her hubby . Let him go and he will regroup but if he's put through the lifestyle she's pushing than his mind will be all fucked up. If she ever loved him and she feels a need to act like she's a single slut than she should just divorce him and move on

gordo12gordo12almost 9 years ago
Not Well Done

The story lacks clarity and character development. Many of the sentences don't really make sense in the context of the story.

You need to get an editor and re-write it before going further. 2*

MattblackUKMattblackUKalmost 9 years ago
Well... it's a start

And a reasonable one, but it needs work.

But you can do it.

hunterdonmalehunterdonmalealmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you for your kind words.

Thank you for your kind words. I'm guessing the naysayers want more sucking/fucking. That will come in a future chapter.

The story is based on a real life couple, where the husband comes to me for advice.

I should post the next chapter in a few days.

Tom

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
cliche

Sorry, I really like cuckold stories but this one isn't even close. There isn't a paragraph without a cliche about cuckolding, which makes it simply predictable and uninteresting. Even as fiction, a therapist of any kind would begin with the understanding that there are as many "flavors" of cuckolding as there are people. E.g. he's black with a huge cock, hubby is white with an average cock, and he's going to end up wearing women's panties and licking them both clean. Please try to be original.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
This is Dumb Even for Fantasy

Does.humiliation ALWAYS have to a.part of this type story.Believe it or not most people find humiliation non erotic and a turn off.Of course that does not include.the fetishists that congregate in LW's Will not continue with this because the predictability of the outcome is 100%.Just another in a litany of abused male spouses.Misandry at its worst

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Too funny for words!

The therapist listened, told him him wife was using him and viewed him with no love or respect. To save himself from being demeaned, degraded, humiliated and exposed to diseases he divorced her. Who wouldn't?

rodryder44rodryder44over 5 years ago
Cuck Coach Ch 1

Interesting start. Need more.

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago
You need what

This is the most hilarious cuck take I've ever read. A cuck coach!

mattenwmattenwabout 1 year ago

Sorry but no therapist, I'm saying no reputable therapist would ever advise cuckolding or threesomes. As a therapist, it is always the patient and his or her opinion that is decisive. The patient receives explanations and information about possible reactions and consequences, but never advice or a recommendation for cuckolding or a threesome!

rem503rem5035 days ago

I love your story. It's exciting for a husband like me to have to admit we are cuckold. Telling someone that our wives are dating and fucking is humiliating and thrilling.

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