All Comments on 'Cuckold Revenge'

We had some money coming in to pay down a couple of large debts. I had heard Mr Ramsey on the radio so I did a spreadsheet to compare my plan against his program. I was astounded at the difference his way made.

I never went for the eat rice and beans part of it (that's crazy talk) but I'd recommend at least looking at his method of getting out of debt. It works for some, probably not for others.

I'm all done, this was just debt-free me trying to pay it forward a little.

The story was good, too.

Skip, I'm sure some of your fan's will like your little twist at the end, but I don't care much for it. It's a good story, but a little to our there for me. I will stick to not scoring when favored authors bomb.

thanks for nothing

Let's be honest here: most of us thought that Cal was paying Paul to entrap Loretta, didn't we? If it actually dawned on you that those two were actual lovers before learning that they left TOGETHER, then... the hell you're doing, reading erotic stories online? You should use your obvious skill to become the GREATEST DETECTIVE ON EARTH! 😆

Anyway, not saying that Loretta didn't get exactly what she deserved here, but I would be down with a continuation of this tale where she somehow get some revenge... Doubtful that such a sequel would score as well as this one probably will, but it still would be an interesting premise.

Fun read. Thanks for the share, author.

Well, that was different. It's... uh... different. Interesting too, well written, and different. I saw that she was being set up by Paul and Cal long before the revealing, but you went a different way on that other stuff. Way different from what I expected.

Not that there's anything wrong with that.

So... 4 stars. Thanks for posting.

... a pretty extreme method of revenge. I'm pretty sure few readers could use the same method.

Decent grammar and a surprise right up through Cal's disappearance. I appreciate that!

Thanks!

Nice twist. At first, when you warned of a twist, l was expecting that Paul was a honeytrap Cal set up. Still, I kinda feel bad for Loretta, not so much for her betrayal, but because Cal was such an unlikable draconian schmuck. Whatever Loretta deserved, the financial hosing she took was too much. Maybe you can concoct some fitting karma for Cal too. Thanks for an entertaining story.

revenge is sweet hope she does find them and burns both of them . part 2 please

Good story with a nice twist

Excellent story with a nice twist. I would like a sequel where the woman gets a little revenge. Not for lost marriage and relationship. She deserved that. But for the financial hosing she got. That was too much and would have me showing up with a sharp knife to "make an offer they could not refuse."

Gamblnluck

Okay, I figured Paul was working with Cal so that he could divorce her and not give her anything, but the gay angle caught me off-guard.

Sorry, I can obviously buy Paul being bi, but Cal switching teams? Lost me there.

“No crimes were committed.”

Fraud is a crime. One may think the ends justify the means, but on the facts in the story Cal and Paul are definitely criminals.

damn u had me going for Loretta. cant stand penny pinchers and sexists behavior. his way or the highway she should have chosen highway after his brainwash

Nice story but to say she never lost anything is not true. She had gone without for a long time and had contributed financially to the debt reduction plan. So basically she was due half of what they had accumulated. Part 2 sees her get at least some measure of revenge and what share she should have got from the divorce.

Just another skippy dud.

Both Cal and Paul were gay, bi is just an excuse before coming out of the closet, so it would just been a matter of time before Cal dumped his wife even if she had never cheated. In this case Call was 100% at fault and author should have had at least something bad happen to him.

Most excellent, I never saw it coming! So original, the bi aspect. Ignore the trolls, they're repressed.

Keep it going!

The bitches in your story were Cal and Paul and it is they who did the burning...

I can't relate to the bi angle, but the collusion to burn the wife was pretty good.

Decent, but I personally don't care for the homosexual angle. I do enjoy your stories.

Well if this isn't proof that Skippy47 Has an actual IQ of 47 I dont know what will

The character "Cal" is not likable at all. He remembers me the character "Harpagon" in the classic Molière's novel "le Miser". They work two jobs each, and he doesn't allow her new clothing or cosmetics????

That's a quick, easy (for her) divorse, based on mental cruelty.

In my book, Cal should've been taken to the cleaners and left alone after being "raped" by the court.

Interesting tale! None of the characters are very likable.

5

i loved it. ignore the repressed trolls

Good to see someone else trying to write a different story than the usual.

Although in the end it was BTB again. Din't we have that for ninner yesterday? And the day before? Still, you get quatro estrelas.

She took the letter to a lawyer and then the police. It took them less than a week to find the men, arrest them for fraud and get her MORE than half of the marital assets. Nobody is THAT stupid.

Husband was emotionally abusive and didn't share his bisexuality? She's better off without him.

Why would someone want to write something like this? Lost a bet?

She walk into it eyes wide open, No lawyer will help here without being paid a good sum of money and she would lose more than she would gain. good story.

Cal's miserly nature will bring pain to their paradise. He will insist on bargain lube in the gallon jug size and sadly things will just never go smoothly.

THE ONLY PROBLEM I HAVE WITH THIS IS THE WRITING WAS QUITE AMATEURISH...

The tags were next to useless, but oh so true.

Cal was Loretta's cuck

The bitch was Cal, Paul's bitch.

Horrible creatures, a BJ doesn't warrant being stripped of everything.

Cal spent months pushing Loretta into Paul's arms and Paul spent that time trying to seduce her.

Does a BJ deserve a divorce? Yes.

Just like Cal, Loretta went through years of hardship to get them to where they were, but she did it under sufference.

Cal obviously didn't have the balls to face her or he would have after Jake and he would have before heading off with Paul. IRL he would have been better to do so as she now has the letter as proof of his embezzlement.

She was stupid thinking that Paul would stick with her after the way he treated Brandy, Sybil and Julie. Another black mark for Cal and Paul, obviously women are only there to be used by these 2.

Now Paul has access to the money Cal and Loretta worked hard getting together. I wonder how long before Cal comes home to nothing.

Way to make the protagonist(s) come off as antagonist. This is a miss, what happened to the old Skippy?

The only problem I have with this story is... well ... everything

No way I would turn gay!!!

No

1* for making the husband turn gay

I've got nothing against gay people, but you could've at least put it in the tag or gave a warning. When people want to read BTB/RAAC stories on here, intimate details about gay sex from the husband is not what they want to read.

Frankly Cal brought a great deal of this on himself.

No part two? This could go somewhere you have a broken character (with a good backstory) with some motivation.

You really do need a part 2, one where she gets maximum revenge against the two of them - especially Paul. I'm leaning toward making him a eunuch while stealing all of Cal's money. I'm a burn the bitch kind of reader but in this case the bitch is called Paul!

So, should Literotica have a radio show where aggrieved spouses can call in and proclaim, 'I'M CHEATING SPOUSE FREEEEEE!" after dumping them?

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Great story!

The result was a bit telegraphed but not the gay angle. Good slip! I wonder if she could go after them for conspiracy to commit fraud for tricking her into the divorce agreement.

Ruined a good story when you made the main character turn gay .

One star .

Frankly , this whore deserves MUCH more punishment

2 lying bastards

get what they deserve.

EACH OTHER

So two men will never take advantage of each other?

Did you hear those pigs cackling as they flew by?

ok...

No And no

How about a heads-up when writing about queers?

When you went gay the story got lousy. At least post it in Gay Male so no one has to read it.

BTB can include murder, when warranted, but fraud like this is not cool. They both cheated but she gets the shaft and Cal is such a coward, he screws her out of what is rightfully hers and won’t even go face-to-face with her in the end. Hope karma bites both him and Paul!

As soon as the author posted about the new guy, you knew the hubby had turned gay. Anyway, if the author doesn't know what he's talking about, he should just skip it. No contract can super cede state law. even a pre-law student could tell you that. so the divorce was null and void. and so is the rest of the story.

Not one of your better stories sorry (jaybee186)

🌟🌟🌟🌟⭐ and 😝 ewww!

At first, I felt sorry for Loretta. She should have divorced Cal up front. No harm, no foul.

The affair with Jake made her a cheating slut. (Why in so many LW stories is oral sex treated as not-cheating?) I still could have felt sorry for her.

When Paul showed up, I figured that he was a setup and the fix was in.

I just wish the story would have left out The Letter. Yeeuch!

The epilogue proves that Loretta was a real skank by ratting out all the other cheaters just because she got caught.

Strange, but different for sure.

I have read several stories on Literotica, where a girlfriend tries to get wifey to cheat, and dump her husband. Only to see the girlfriend ride off into the sunset, with ex- hubby. I think this is a much more realistic ending, even with the gay angle. Why? First off, most guys have given up on marriage. Look at it , as if marriage was structured like a home loan.You pay in it for 15-30 years. Anytime during the loan period, the bank can kick you out, move in another tenant. You are still liable to make the payments. If you actually pay the loan off, the bank can move in a new tenant and kick you out, until your kids are out of school. You are still liable for the loan. At the time your kids are out of school, the house is sold, but you only get 1/2 your money back! Most men today, realize this is a very, very bad deal for them. Woman’s liberation has accomplished a lot of good things for the opposite sex. But a downfall has been, the degrading of a sexual relationship with a woman, and the changes in the roles both men and women fill. Today, if you told an 18/year old guy, he would need to make something out of himself to attract a women, and get married, he would fall down laughing. Back in the day, women were told” why buy the cow, if he can get the milk for free” Today- The cows are now aggressively trying to give their milk away, to anybody who wants it.

“ you’ve come a long way baby” or have you? 5 stars.

Well, it's different that's for sure. I don't know about the men being gay, but I have heard of the wives/girlfriends becoming lesbians. In fact a friend of mine lost his wife to another woman. They're still friends, but that's about it. I don't know that many gay guys, so I have no experience with that.

In the story, she started down the road of cheating on him with a guy from work (Jake), then escalated it with Paul. But if she hadn't been listening to her co-workers, she might not have been trying to get with Jake. Sure, Paul might have been a set up, but it worked out for him (Cal) as he knew she would cheat again, since he knew about Jake. She gave up everything but her job, to be with Paul, only to have neither Paul nor Cal, nor anything else. Needless to say, she burned herself. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Fuck yes. Leave that bitch penniless and alone like she deserves.

The gay angle was perfection. Would love more like this.

I would have liked to see her revenge herself on Paul and Cal. They were a-holes. And just because the double twist would have been fun.

Cal and Paul her to be tracked down and hung out to dry for conspiracy and fraud. Wife lost 1/2 out assets from divorce the to the conspiracy.

Mfj

I usually read the comments before spending time with a story, sorry I did not this time. You should give a guy a heads up about the homo content... It was a big surprise as well as repugnant... Sorry I liked ur other stories...

Holy reading comments I am certain I am the only heterosexual reading stories on this site. Personally I really liked the story right up until you had to make them gay. There are literally infinite other options you could have used that would have made it a 5 star piece. Funny though how the toxic fems spouting off about the whore getting revenge, obviously like with most things they have zero clue that words have definitions. Revenge: when a wronged party retaliates, retribution for a grievous act. Revenge for revenge is not a thing, any heinous acts upon the guys is just that more of the same, just evil

actions perpetrated by her.

Kept thinking this story was getting dumber and dumber by the line. The relationships were over way to quickly throughout the writing. None of it made any sense. Even the ending was totally a farce. Not a worthy story to read in the grand scheme of things as it is completely dumb like the writer.

Cal: "I'M CHEATER FREE!"

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Funny! It really is.

Loved it!!

Wife was the one hard done by here. She should have left him but his revenge was so over the top it was illegal and fraudulent.

Mmmmmm

Maybe the worst story I’ve ever read.

Honestly, her "lover" leaving her for her husband is like... wow. She got f'ing destroyed. I'd imagine that underneath all that anger she must have the self esteem of a maggot at this point. Talk about brutal.