by cuddlyvicious
Please write more, I love where this is going even if it happened all too fast . Unlikely in reality anyone would submit so easily, but a great story either way.
What can one say about such insanity? Either your fans are on your mental level or your mental level has adjusted to your fans. Anyway, this author proves that idiots don't die out. And some comments support this claim! 1*!
A burglar who takes up residence? How idiotic is that? When does the husband have to go back to work? Do you think no one notices that when they are no longer there but are at home? Your story is completely illogical. If the burglar leaves the house, the police will chase him and the wife will be divorced from now on! 1* because less is not possible!
comments from anonymous might just be comments from Cry Baby who will spend time reading fantasy fiction and then complaining becomes it seems unreal. Plenty of Reality to read and complain about yet too chicken to oppose being stripped of Liberty or celebrate the limited diminishing freedom that remains to allow fantasy fiction to be shared. PEACE