by bawdybloke
Anonymousabout 6 hours ago
Thank god this shit story is over 1star
It's 25 chapters long; if you didn't like it, you probably should have stopped reading after Chapter One!
Thanks to all those who commented; I wrote it around five years ago and never posted it on this site. I thought it may amuse and titillate some on here, hence why I submitted it now! :)
Got boring.
Hated the beatings, the brother, peter not getting any pussy anymore, especially from is wife!
Thus story went from exciting to disgusting and then lame. Does he ever grow a pair and get him marriage back?