by TheGraduate88
This chapter wasn't for me. The vice gag, and the weighted nipples (pierced was good but the rest ) the posture collar, these things is just too much for my understanding. Martha is really enjoying her humiliation and is being very compliant so why the torture? I understand some reads will love it and as a writer you have to write YOUR story the way you see it. I am still on board with the story as it has been 5 stars until now this one only gets 3 from me. thanks for sharing.
Couldn't finish this one, think I'm done with this story. I think it's well written, just not to my taste; made my dick very limp
I was okay with the story for a while. But Lori is a brutal person. She is over the line. This should be in BDSM category, not mature. The last chapter was the worst. I hope subsequent chapters are more redeeming. Im waiting to render a final consideration.
Cuckquean stories where the husband has total disregard for the wife don’t excite me it’s supposed to be consensual I really hate wen the girl he’s with is allowed to take liberties beyond the wife’s limits so think I won’t bother anymore with this story
this quickly turned into a gratuitously beating of an elderly women. backhanding someone would bruise for days this is just a 'beating/torturing up old lady' fetish
Lori is playing with Martha’s emotionally and physically bruising her. Obviously looking at her as a long term project until she reacts and never thinks