by SlutProblems
I think this is not your best effort. What's the point to this story? I know everyone hates someone who cuts in line, but the punishment seems not to match the crime, plus there's an overlay of magic in the story? Not that sexy, either. Sorry, JB
This story request (I realize Literotica deletes the requests so you folks can't see them) required magic. You are right about the punishment and the crime though, JB. I was definitely not bringing my A game there. In fact, this story was one of the hardest to write for me. I'm not sure why. It was a great prompt. Maybe it was just my headspace that day. Reading it back it isn't as bad as I remember it, but you are right. Not my best.
I like the story (written by one of my favorite people), but have to say, it needs more. I want to see what hijinks she gets into as she gets dumber and dumber.
Her hypnosis seems permanent. I would have preferred her to come to her senses after draining the cocks, but knowing that she loved it and will crave them again.